[Catalyst-commits] r8764 - trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/pen

[zamolxes at dev.catalyst.perl.org]

Author: zamolxes
Date: 2008-12-06 15:51:24 +0000 (Sat, 06 Dec 2008)
New Revision: 8764

Modified:
   trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/pen/6.pod
Log:
fixes


Modified: trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/pen/6.pod
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/pen/6.pod	2008-12-06 15:47:02 UTC (rev 8763)
+++ trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/pen/6.pod	2008-12-06 15:51:24 UTC (rev 8764)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 recovery emails, monthly newsletter, here's your order, invoice
 attached. The works. 
 
-L<Catalyst::View::Email> is the pretty much standard way to send email
+L<Catalyst::View::Email> is the standard way to send email
 from Catalyst apps. So you can start removing that nasty email sending
 code from your controllers now ;)
 
@@ -13,17 +13,16 @@
 
 Well, first things first, install L<Catalyst::View::Email> from CPAN. 
 
-Now let's start building our app. Not being very original , I decided to
-go with a Christmas theme: this will allow people to let their would-be
+Now let's start building our app. Not being very original, I decided to
+go with a Christmas theme: the app will allow people to let their would-be
 Santa know what they want for Christmas. So we'll need the user's email and
 name, Santa's email and a description for the gift. Wrap all this in an
 email and deliver to Santa :)
 
 Obviously I'll just focus on the email part, so I'll leave important stuff
 like input validation or DOS protection (you don't want some kiddie sending 
-gazillions of emails through your app) as an exercise to the reader :)
+gazillions of emails through your app) as an exercise to the reader.
 
-
 Here goes:
 
  catalyst.pl SantaLetter
@@ -109,7 +108,7 @@
 =head2 Using an email template
 
 So now you know how to quickly send emails from Catalyst. But stuffing
-that message buddy in a string is rather dirty. This is where 
+that message body in a string is rather dirty. This is where 
 L<Catalyst::View::Email::Template> comes handy. It will use your default
 view to render a template, assemble a multi-part email using 
 L<Email::MIME::Creator> and send it out.
@@ -159,12 +158,12 @@
  Merry X-mas,
  Santa's helpers
 
-Now you can change your email templates without touching the controller code. Cool!
+Now you can change your email templates without touching the controller code. Neat!
 
 =head2 What now?
 
 You probably want more features, like sending HTML email or attaching files.
-L<Catalyst::View::Email> handles these things as well, instead of directly setting
+L<Catalyst::View::Email> handles these things well: instead of directly setting
 the email body, you can pass an arrayref with Email::Mime parts , and there's
 a nice example in the documentation. 
 
@@ -174,4 +173,5 @@
 =head1 AUTHOR
 
 Bogdan Lucaciu <bogdan at sinapticode.ro>
+
 Sinapticode