[Catalyst-commits] r8846 - trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008

[jester at dev.catalyst.perl.org]

Author: jester
Date: 2008-12-12 13:20:04 +0000 (Fri, 12 Dec 2008)
New Revision: 8846

Modified:
   trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/10.pod
   trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/11.pod
Log:
extremely minor edits

Modified: trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/10.pod
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/10.pod	2008-12-12 11:57:14 UTC (rev 8845)
+++ trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/10.pod	2008-12-12 13:20:04 UTC (rev 8846)
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 Unfortunately this is not entirely satisfactory, as sometimes you're
 using a plugin that requires an arrayref even with only one item (and
 subsequent entries can't be bogus without leading to problems), or if
-need to know the length of the array without cumbersome
+you need to know the length of the array without cumbersome
 workarounds. Enter L<Moose>:
 
  sub setup {

Modified: trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/11.pod
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/11.pod	2008-12-12 11:57:14 UTC (rev 8845)
+++ trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2008/11.pod	2008-12-12 13:20:04 UTC (rev 8846)
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@
   );
 
 although this is still quite verbose, of course. Generally, this
-approach is only ever used to allow URL localisations - for example if
+approach is only ever used to allow URL localisations. For example, if
 you sell a white label app to a foreign client you can change the URL
-parts to their language; I'm aware of people having done this in
+parts to their language. I'm aware of people having done this in
 production.
 
 Of course, the other thing you can do is to use this to make reusable
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
 
 Of course, I still think that Catalyst's self-contained controller approach
 is better, but if you really want routes, please consider the code above as
-under the same license as perl and send CatalystX::Routes to the CPAN :)
+under the same license as Perl and send CatalystX::Routes to the CPAN :)
 
 -- mst