[Catalyst-commits] r11905 - in Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk: . lib/Catalyst/Manual lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial

Thu Nov 19 09:57:28 GMT 2009

Author: t0m
Date: 2009-11-19 09:57:28 +0000 (Thu, 19 Nov 2009)
New Revision: 11905

Modified:
   Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/
   Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Cookbook.pod
   Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
   Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/07_Debugging.pod
   Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/10_Appendices.pod
Log:
 r11821 at t0mlaptop (orig r11786):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-08 18:31:13 +0000
 Attempt to branch out to work on adding stuff to the tutorial.
 
 r11854 at t0mlaptop (orig r11819):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-14 15:57:25 +0000
 Add link to SQLite, ensure they get version 3.
 r11878 at t0mlaptop (orig r11843):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-16 05:43:41 +0000
 Fix minor grammatical issue.
 r11879 at t0mlaptop (orig r11844):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-16 05:54:04 +0000
 Add links to the databases. Let the users see what we're talking about.
 r11880 at t0mlaptop (orig r11845):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-16 05:55:41 +0000
 Out of data? I think out of date is meant here.
 r11881 at t0mlaptop (orig r11846):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-16 05:59:04 +0000
 Fix dead link.
 r11882 at t0mlaptop (orig r11847):  wolfman2000 | 2009-11-16 06:02:14 +0000
 Add link.



Property changes on: Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk
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Name: svk:merge
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4ad37cd2-5fec-0310-835f-b3785c72a374:/Catalyst-Manual/5.80/branches/altreus-is-fixing-inconsistencies:11899
4ad37cd2-5fec-0310-835f-b3785c72a374:/trunk/Catalyst-Manual:8492
   + 4ad37cd2-5fec-0310-835f-b3785c72a374:/Catalyst-Manual/5.70/trunk:10285
4ad37cd2-5fec-0310-835f-b3785c72a374:/Catalyst-Manual/5.80/branches/altreus-is-fixing-inconsistencies:11899
4ad37cd2-5fec-0310-835f-b3785c72a374:/Catalyst-Manual/5.80/branches/tutorial_role_updates:11847
4ad37cd2-5fec-0310-835f-b3785c72a374:/trunk/Catalyst-Manual:8492

Modified: Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Cookbook.pod
===================================================================

--- Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Cookbook.pod	2009-11-19 09:56:33 UTC (rev 11904)
+++ Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Cookbook.pod	2009-11-19 09:57:28 UTC (rev 11905)
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
 
 This is extensively covered in other documentation; see in particular
 L<Catalyst::Plugin::Authentication> and the Authentication chapter
-of the Tutorial at L<Catalyst::Manual::Tutorial::Authorization>.
+of the Tutorial at L<Catalyst::Manual::Tutorial::06_Authorization>.
 
 =head2 Pass-through login (and other actions)
 
@@ -997,7 +997,7 @@
 
 =head3 Using XML::Feed
 
-A more robust solution is to use XML::Feed, as was done in the Catalyst
+A more robust solution is to use L<XML::Feed>, as was done in the Catalyst
 Advent Calendar. Assuming we have a C<view> action that populates
 'entries' with some DBIx::Class iterator, the code would look something
 like this:

Modified: Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
===================================================================
--- Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod	2009-11-19 09:56:33 UTC (rev 11904)
+++ Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod	2009-11-19 09:57:28 UTC (rev 11905)
@@ -563,6 +563,9 @@
 create a database table and load some sample data.  We will use 
 SQLite (L<http://www.sqlite.org>), a popular database that is
 lightweight and easy to use. Be sure to get at least version 3. Open
+create a database table and load some sample data.  We will use
+L<SQLite|http://www.sqlite.org>, a popular database that is
+lightweight and easy to use. Be sure to get at least version 3. Open
 C<myapp01.sql> in your editor and enter:
 
     --

Modified: Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/07_Debugging.pod
===================================================================
--- Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/07_Debugging.pod	2009-11-19 09:56:33 UTC (rev 11904)
+++ Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/07_Debugging.pod	2009-11-19 09:57:28 UTC (rev 11905)
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 
     [% c.log.debug("This is a test log message") %]
 
-As with many other logging facilities, you a method is defined for
+As with many other logging facilities, a method is defined for
 each of the following "logging levels" (in increasing order of
 severity/importance):
 

Modified: Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/10_Appendices.pod
===================================================================
--- Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/10_Appendices.pod	2009-11-19 09:56:33 UTC (rev 11904)
+++ Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/10_Appendices.pod	2009-11-19 09:57:28 UTC (rev 11905)
@@ -139,8 +139,10 @@
 =head1 APPENDIX 2: USING POSTGRESQL AND MYSQL
 
 The main database used in this tutorial is the very simple yet powerful
-SQLite.  This section provides information that can be used to "convert"
-the tutorial to use PostgreSQL and MySQL.  However, note that part of
+L<SQLite|http://www.sqlite.org>.  This section provides information
+that can be used to "convert" the tutorial to use
+L<PostgreSQL|http://www.postgresql.org> and
+L<MySQL|http://dev.mysql.com>.  However, note that part of
 the beauty of the MVC architecture is that very little database-specific
 code is spread throughout the system (at least when MVC is "done
 right").  Consequently, converting from one database to another is
@@ -511,7 +513,7 @@
 
 =head2 MySQL
 
-B<NOTE:> This section is out of data with the rest of the tutorial.
+B<NOTE:> This section is out of date with the rest of the tutorial.
 Consider using SQLite or PostgreSQL since they are current.
 
 Use the following steps to adapt the tutorial to MySQL.  Thanks to Jim


