[Catalyst-commits] r13894 - trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2010/pen

[getty at dev.catalyst.perl.org]

Author: getty
Date: 2010-12-24 05:31:34 +0000 (Fri, 24 Dec 2010)
New Revision: 13894

Modified:
   trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2010/pen/facebook.pod
Log:
Small fix to the catalyst advent calendar 2010 facebook entry 



Modified: trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2010/pen/facebook.pod
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--- trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2010/pen/facebook.pod	2010-12-24 05:28:25 UTC (rev 13893)
+++ trunk/examples/CatalystAdvent/root/2010/pen/facebook.pod	2010-12-24 05:31:34 UTC (rev 13894)
@@ -191,12 +191,12 @@
 gave you like the user would do it. This can also give you more information,
 cause you access the Facebook API with the rights of the user.
 
-But this depends on the rights you request. Generally its a good advice to try
-as much requests as possible on behalf of a user so that Facebook doesn't see
-your application as a kind of information leaker.
+Generally its a good advice to try as much requests as possible on behalf of a
+user so that Facebook doesn't see your application as a kind of information
+leaker.
 
 The implementation itself is now a bit of a problem in the current state of
-Facebook. Technical you only get official good documentation solved with FBML,
+Facebook. Technical you only get official good documentation, which uses FBML,
 but on the other side on the FBML page you get the information that you should
 use the L<http://developers.facebook.com/docs/reference/javascript/|Javascript SDK>.
 Interesting is also stuff like