[Epo-marketing] Little project for someone

[Mike Whitaker]

On 3 Dec 2008, at 18:42, Christopher Nehren wrote:

> On Tue, Dec 02, 2008 at 11:25:34 -0800 , J. Shirley wrote:
>> The Enlightened Perl Organization is a community oriented group built
>> to enhance the quality and image of Perl in the enterprise setting.
>> The EPO is designed to offer grants for development, marketing and
>> support for leading Perl projects.  For more information, or to
>> contact the EPO board, please visit http://www.enlightenedperl.org/
>
>
> If we're going to be nit-picky...
>
> s/community oriented/community-oriented/
>
> And put a period at the end of the last sentence. I tend to put spaces
> after URLs so they're easier to copy+paste.
>
> Otherwise, looks great. :)

I'm a wee bit unhappy with the middle sentence, since that's not all  
we do. Conscious of not wanting to turn this into an outbreak of  
bikeshedding, mind. How about (taking in all the comments to date)....
----8<----
The Enlightened Perl Organization is a community-oriented group built  
to enhance the quality and image of Perl in the enterprise setting.  
The EPO manages working groups and grants for the development,  
marketing and support of leading Perl projects. For more information,  
or to contact the EPO board, please visit http://www.enlightenedperl.org/ 
  .
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